TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Magi 07 TL [Timed-notchecked][Edited]
Workraw: Magi07-RC

====Check consistency with the term "Djinn"  and "Jinni"====



17
Me?
Thank us?
{the word we're looking for is お礼, and not おれ}

18
I'm grateful to both of you for giving me another shot at life.
{just a pointer here that she literally says "giving me a free {unchained} future" }

21 23
Alibaba and I didn't help free you just so you'd owe us something.
I'm pretty sure Alibaba did it because it was the right thing to do!
-->
Not just me, but also Alibaba will probably say you don't need to thank him.
That's because he's such a nice guy after all.
{I found the liberal translation too far astray}
{edit from my pure literal sentences is recommended}

24
Gee... Now that made me miss Alibaba even more now.
Gee... Now that made me miss Alibaba even more.
{now was in the line twice}

28
It's beautiful out today, ain't it?
It sure is beautiful out today, ain't it?
{just felt like adding that in}

41
Oh? You guys actually came from across the desert?
Oh? You've crossed the desert?
{the reason I'm reverting this edit is because the verb used here is "koeru", or "to pass through"/"to cross". but whatever.}
{the context is based on the feat of actually being able to cross it}

===Timing error due to missing tl (?)
{this is the current situation:}
77
I'm properly wearing clothes as you can see.
{the line with this timing is said by Sinbad himself}
78
Your clothes are {\i1}way{\i0} too revealing!
79
You people can stop now. I apologize if our master has proved himself a nuisance to you both.

81
Thanks a lot, Mr. Sin's friends!
Thanks a lot, Mr. Sin's subordinates!
{I'm hearing 部下 here.}

165
What? {Hey?}
For sure? (Really now?}
{it's hard to come up with short but still fitting translations}

169
{\pos(321,67)}You're a pretty big fella! Are all the other Fanalis like him, Mor? {TL: I can't hear this line clearly...}
{ I can't hear it in detail either, but I think you're spot on with the translation.}

222
What do you think, Aladdin!
What do you think, Aladdin?
{question mark}

232
I'm staying here. {TL: dat face too cute *w*}
Count me in as well. {TL: dat face too cute *w*}
{both possible, I guess. I try to stick closer to the literal translation}

275
Must taste pretty good. {TLC plox.}
{fine as is. The phrase いいご身分だね is commonly translated as "I'm envious"/"I envy you"}

279
I need some food. {TLC? Seems like it's missing something.}
I need to obtain some food somehow. 
{Showing what the context is, but the general translation is fine.}

302
That Phantasmal Blade of Scarlet Fog is as frightening as ever, Zaynab. {TLC please}
That Blade of the Scarlet Phantasmagoric Fog is as frightening as ever, Zaynab.
{no problem with it: sekigenmutou{赤幻霧刀} per kanji: Red Illusion Mist Blade} 

303
{the translation is already in line 302}

304
{it appears to me that the corroding is part of the fog, not of the blade. I'd say "Blade of the Corrosive Golden Fog"}
{same goes for the other blades, but it's a matter of preference, I guess.}
Blade of the Golden Corrosive Fog
Blade of the Ebon Shackling Fog, and so on.